Reviews for WHOOKOS [CONCEPT] - Episode: 1

[jordanhawaii]

Voice Acting: Some voices were good, but were honestly bad.
Art: Like a bad generic anime style that everyone does on deviantart. There's absolutely no diversity in the character designs at all. Just different eye and hair color.

Backgrounds: Bland and boring.

Story: For the first episode you would think you would try think of something creative and interesting but I know you are trying to introduce the characters. The only thing they did in the episode was go to a tree and claimed it as a new hangout. There was nothing interesting about it.

Creativity: The characters all fit generic troupes. Main character is a soft spoken; actually there are like 3 characters like that. There's always one loud guy in a show who is always acting dumb and obnoxious.

Try make a more interesting story with more diverse characters, better plot, stick to 2D backgrounds, and learn anatomy instead of using that same bland style you are still sticking with.
0/10

WHOOKOS responds:

Thanks. I'll keep improving.

[Gianni]

This is pretty slick, charming, enjoyable, the characters are interesting and I'm looking forward to where this goes. What I'll tell you is that I think the pacing needs to go a little faster, writing needs to assume a little bit more intelligence on behalf of the viewer. It crawls and statements are all almost too obvious, although a couple of moments made me chuckle. For example, when the red haired dude laughed at BB talking about wood. Juvenile and obvious joke, heh, sure, but what it did RIGHT was how the redhead cut straight to laughter, filling in that obvious joke for the audience and not saying something like "Hard wood, huh?" You know, just assuming folks'll connect the dots.

Tell you what though, I've been drinking a bit more than normal tonight so this review might be trash. Still, I think that this shows a lot of promise and charm. It's really cleanly done and I look forward to more. Also, cast me.

[OtakuDanny]

Man! I cannot stop watching this episode! It's great! :D

[Bistander]

Cool stuff! Smooth animation, I LOVE how you painted the foliage. The scripting and plotline seem very promising.

You shall be watched!

[UltraAnimaniac101]

Very entertaining. Characters are very interesting and funny. Though I swear most of them look like girls.