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Reviews for "Hunting Kim"

so, she's being hunted for having enormous tits and an anatomically incorrect body structure?

I see potential. It was wasted, though.

There's definately many ways you could go with this, but this isn't really that good. The animation moves nice, but the actual material is sloppy, the cinematography is garbage, and it looks like it was made in 2004. It does look like there was effort put in, however.

The only thing I can suggest is to give it a story that consists of more than 5 words and an implied setting. If you're going for a Mirror's Edge kinda thing, don't fuck it up with a bullshit "Oh there's a government and they're being mean waaah" setting. If you are going for a minimalistic story, than you went to minimal. I do appreciate that things are left up to speculation, but nothing makes sense. Why is the lady in black running fast with an angry face? Why is the lady in blue trying to kill her? What did the thing at the end mean? Clarity would be nice.

If the story isn't the biggest part, the big part should be the action. I like the shot where she slammed into the one dude, but that was the only cool part. If you're going to be slicing Helicopters, at least give her a sword or a definable weapon/means of killing. The most important part of an action series with sci-fi elements is explosions. Definitely add more explosions.

In general, you should go more for a vibe of badassery instead of 'running running running sloppy boobs running blood'. I, personally, don't want to see a badass character ruined by wishy-washy blushing or by having big boobs. I want to see the lady in black murdering everything in her path whilst not looking at the explosions, and getting into epic and treacherous situations. I don't want to see an "oh kim-senpai" moments.

I'n still not sure who Kim is. The lady in black, right? I hope it is.

Sorry man, the music was nice, great even, but the video didn't quite seem to sync up. You got some of the specific timing very well like when the helecopter hits the ground, but the activity during the more intense music seemed slow, like with the sniper, during that point I feel a huge fight against 20 or so guys would fit better.

Also I feel you overused the shots with the woman in blue, and the close ups. It would be nice to know a relative position of that blue chick, is she on some other rooftop, in a nearby highrise or is she watching all this through a monitor?

I also want to touch on the music. It's good instrumentally but the lyrics were really repetitive (I'm not sure if the music is yours or not but I'll go ahead and note these things) I could see this in an anime or other longer work as a high octane mood setter for a fight or other intense scene, but as a standalone, with how distinct the lyrics are, the repetitive nature becomes more obvious. Length wise... kinda the same thing, it felt really short for a standalone.

Some suggestions might be to pull out the camera a bit and let the motions sync up with the music more than the view changes. Assuming the music isn't yours try picking something either less repetitive in the lyrics or less focused on the lyrics, and while I realize it's more work try going with a longer song.

Overall, not bad, not great, it was good.

That womans tits must give her the worst back problems while running that fast.... Seriously was waiting for her to take out a damn guard with those things.

What a shit! It was just SLOW and if you tried to make epic this video you failed.( citation incoming ) Nah! Just kidding! However nice tits! eh eh eh just kidding guys but yeah it's a bit slow, not so epic and nothing of special...eccept for...you know?...Titties.