This would be great if you had frame by frame animated the expressions instead of tweening them and also if you did some study on anatomy and colour theory. Those boobs were way too big! (not that I don't like big boobs just I think they could go down a size considering the style and feel of the animation) Also the highlights on the brunette girls hair was grey and made her look kinda old (unless that was your intention). Apart from that I thought it was cool!