Reviews for Beyond Darkness

[MentalMaestro]

Well damn. That was a powerful story. The dialogue errors and mix-ups were annoying (the coffee shop scene had a very confusing one) but not a huge deal overall. The creepy parts had just the right amount of suspense, not jump-scares like I was expecting, and the plot twists towards the end were mind blowing as well.

Without going to detail why (spoilers would ruin the suspense and "mind-f*ck"), I honestly preferred Ending 2. Either way the reader chooses, it's a sad but sweet tale that makes the characters real and tempts another read-though... Much respect to you!!

[rogice44]

This game, it gave me major feels, at first I thought it was gonna be a horror game but then as it progressed I realised it wouldn't be, but still, it was truly amazing, I hope you make another game like this and again give me feels never meant to be felt by mortals.

[Dernamenlosefan]

Such a wondrfull story! I can't wait to see what's the other ending!T.T

[Zeerion323]

....I can't really put this into words. This game was amazing, beautiful really. By the end, I had quite a few lumps in my throat. This was a masterpiece. Keep up the excellent work, please. I look forward to it.

[PeaceEnsurer]

I really liked this story, very deep and ripe. However, I noticed some slight awkwardness in the text and typos. For example, Agnes says "mom, you are here" It sounds a bit forced and robotic to me, so try to use contractions more often. Also, when the screen goes static, the word cable is spelt wrong. The music is very good and well placed in scenarios. In the fireworks scene, the word "look" is capitalized when it shouldn't be. Really peeves me to see a character make a dumb decision and put themselves into danger, Agnes should have let Keiichi walk her home. Panicking has a 'k" in it. The burned effect on each day page was interesting. I don't mean to be a grammar nazi, just constructive criticism. Grade-A job!