I don't even know what to say here. I guess I'll just start with what I saw. First, there were a lot of grammar and spelling errors, but I'm far from an English major to care, but there were enough I wanted to point it out. The story is a little slow at first, and it will drive people away. That alone is a real shame, I have to admit, this actually brought a tear to my eye, even if I knew where this was going about halfway through, it was done so well! My suggestion to you, when doing a visual novel like this, add an auto play option, and when adding multiple endings, have a replay or choose again option at the end. Saves from having to refresh the page and load it again. But other then that, I want to Thank You very much for this. It made me feel for today, and I don't usually like to, but today it was good. Yeah, today it was good!