not going to modify your score because of it, but there were far too many spelling and grammar mistakes for me to even begin to list here. Vastly more than I ever expected, nearly every other line had something wrong. The honest problems with this are the overly repeated scenes, the lack of anything changing, the terribly repetitive music, and the sound of every letter being printed with the words that is not only distracting but extremely annoying. This isn't much in the way of a game but needs too much on the part of the user to just be in movies. If you want this to be a game, provide some choices for the player or something more for them to do but just press the same button to advance slow dialogue. The art was not bad, but just that. Not bad, not good, just a filler for a story. I would have really enjoyed reading the story had it been just that, but I also would have finished it in a couple of minutes instead of the time it took me to wait for scene after scene to load so I could read a sentence or two.