Loved it.
Reviews for "Shattered Heaven Ep. 1"
AdamTilford responds:
Glad you enjoyed it :)
It's very ambitious and I like the amount of world building that's being done. One thing dragging it down though is that you desperately need to adjust the audio levels to be consistent.
Also, the noses on the female characters are a bit off. I see what you're trying to do, but that kind of 80's style needs a lot bolder shading and lines in the right places to work. Basically what indicates the tip of the nose is too bold and makes it appear strange. If you want to improve that you could study how noses look in real life and in anime as well. For example, the anime movie Patlabor 2 has some good realistic ones.
lost half a star cuz of animation and art quality but i salute you for coming up with this . i can imagine how much effort is done cuz i'm an animator myself . i just hope you guys can sustain this project till finish . keep up the good work
14mins jeez this must've taken forever
This could shape up to be a really good series. It reminds me of gundam seed. The voice actors are pretty good. My only recommendations to make it better would be to study human proportion more. Everybody else has said the same things
It's got potential, just take your time and gradually step up the art game. If you're doing anime style pay attention to the proportion of facial feature/ and bodys and make sure when you're doing pose to pose that all the key poses are solid. Don't be afraid of getting detail into the characters. That said I can't wait to see the next one!
AdamTilford responds:
Haha, it took 6 months. I'm choosing getting the story out over higher quality. As I go, the quality will definitely increase as I'll become more accustomed with the style and balancing it between work and writing books and such. The plan is to get some animator help, background artists cause I hate backgrounds >_>, etc, etc.
Glad you enjoyed it so far. :)
Wow! Did I just spot Xin and Hanto!? Nice! XD
AdamTilford responds:
Lol, yeah. I'm friends with their voice actors. They actually did the extras in the episode and will be appearing later on in the series as actual characters.