The art was nice and tightly wound, but it did absolutely nothing to enhance the comedy at all, and the writing came off very, very forced to me. It almost seemed like the length was the top priority, because these characters were absolutely not entertaining enough to carry such a long cartoon. You clearly know what you're doing when it comes to the technical stuff with cartoons, but the foundation of this one wasn't as strong as it needed to be, the writing definitely needs work. This could have been a 2-3 minute cartoon and been much more effective/entertaining.