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Reviews for "DJ Sash - Goodbye"

dude

give me the lead plus vox so i can remix it?

I see a "trance" remix

LOL

watever

Rave4Yourself responds:

KK, shall.

Freaky

LoL, when that womens voice came in i litterally looked around me cause i thought the voice was coming from all around me. I got scared, very very scared. That exactly why i am giving you a 10. Dam

Rave4Yourself responds:

Lol, awesome. Not exactly what i was going for, but awesome, :P

Thanks! :D

WOW!

hmm, only a mouth full of energy drink. That was good, great, beautiful... but not what I call a hit. See, if you really want to make a hit, study the songs out there(The fruit by Sander Kleinenberg is a fav), sure you do way better than them in some areas but in others you are lacking (I think you'll reach it). You have to have more diversity, and make those melodys stand out more, don't make them original, make them unique.

I loved the song, it sounds like the vox kinda ruined it, but also it made the song, near the end when the woman sung softly et clearly was amazing a really opened my ears. Get an actually singer, and make them sing someting catchy and repeatative.

Seriously, it was perfect for what it was, no one could do it better.

Rave4Yourself responds:

Lol, yeah! Think about if it were an entire 2 liter!!! HOH HOH HOH, that'd be SWEEEEEEEET, ;D

K thanks for the tip/s man, I'll think about what you said. The vox did sort of ruin it, but whatever! :P If you want i can send a non-voxed version, I think it'd sound better, lol.

Very Nice

I listened to all of the song. The vox was really good. The vocals seemed all right in the beginning, but I don't know. I think they could have been a lot better. I don't know who sung it, but it just didn't feel meaningful. ^^; Overall good! Synth was great (lovin' it), lyrics were good. I think you did a good job.

Rave4Yourself responds:

Ya i know. Meaningful? When have vocals been meaningful? At least in happy hardcore, :P "da da da hit the sunshine da da da touch my heart!"

lol, its stuff like that, :P

Thanks for review.

Nice Sasha

Sasha, nicely done. This is a good song and i enjoyed listening to it.

Several comments though. First, i wouldn't have put both the vocals of the guy and the girl into this song. The vocals for both of them are two different styles. When i heard the guy in the intro i was expecting a deeper and more robust song, but then when it switched over to the girl it was smoother, had more finesse. I don't know if thats what you were going for, but to me it didn't seem right because i felt that i was listening to two different songs.

Also, i recommend toning down the volume on all the music during vocal parts. The girls vocals are great but i can barely hear here. You want her vocals to be the dominate sound in your song, so tone down the volume on the music during vocals and fade it back in when she isn't singing. I think that would have made the song a lot clearer and it would have delievered with more strength.

Also, just an idea. I think it would have been awesome if at one part you just completly faded the music out and had only vocals of the girl. Then cut her off for like 5 seconds of complete silence and BAM bust the music back in...just an idea though..

Overall, i enjoyed the song and i'm enjoying your CD sasha. Good work, but get some sleep and don't spend too much time on the computer.

Rave4Yourself responds:

Thanks ivan, i'll work on it. Ya the vox aren't placed right. I'll try and do that 5 sec silence thing too.