That was it? I was expecting something bizarre to happen...
Reviews for "Father"
Ok animation. The Dad shouldn't be so sad. If his wife hadn't died, he probably would want her to after a few more years together. Especially after the stress a child puts on a family.
The storyline is heartful, touching and engaging. It has viewers crying, tearing up and getting depressed over it.
However this round is about how well the animator ties the music to his or her masterpiece.
The flashbacks at first showed depth but after a while it made me anxious.
The loud heartbeat that starts and stops abruptly with no noticeable fade into the music.
It made the flashbacks seem epileptic. Maybe less frequent flashbacks and longer mini-scenes?
The very first start of the music into the heartbeat was perfect. Then the re-entry of the heart became abrupt from then on.
In essence: I would have scored you higher for better musical transitions.
A good Transition is what would of made this front page quality; in my opinion. Good try though, just try to keep the emotion flowing with motion and avoid sharp/drastic changes.
Great, but depressing. Did I mention morbid?