For a first animation it was pretty awesome. I don't have any complaints we all hated the zubat's when we were kids, and I also really liked how you animated the small stuff like the pokeballs,and the glistening water. but yeah i kinda seen some of the stuff looked a little bad; like the shoe. I'm not gonna dock off any points thought because its your first one of course, and i couldn't do anything like this.
Anyways Good Job
Reviews for "Pokemon Zubat Cave"
LitPower responds:
Thanks a lot, yeah I was so proud of those pokeballs when I did them haha ;) Yeah sorry about that, I aim to get better and hopefully my drawing will improve over some practice, but thanks anyways :D
thats why you use repels...
LitPower responds:
We have all found that out the hard way :)
After pokemon blue i learned to take like 20 max repels with me
LitPower responds:
Well you get more super repels for your money though ;)
i like it, even though it reminds me of "Pokemon Red: Rock Tunnel" haha, and no boobies :)
LitPower responds:
I'm sorry to disappoint everyone with the lack of boobies here, maybe next time :)
Pretty good. Worthy of 3 stairs and a half.
The art was a little iffy. In some places, it looked really good, but in others, such as pretty much every drawing of Ash, it didn't look that great. The backgrounds like the bushes / tree in the very beginning were bland. I know it's a cartoon, but each bush-bump looked exactly the same. And the rocks in the wall of the cave's entrance looked odd. You might've been better without them. Not sure why Ash was smiling as he walked into the Zubat cave, either. Ash's shoe as he steps down to trigger the Pokemon battle looked pretty...meh, too.
I will say that the actual Pokemon battle setting looked cool! I HIGHLY recommend that you stray away from hand written looking fonts, though. That's -my- own personal tick. They just don't look good. But hey, if they float your boat, go ahead.
When Ash says "Pikachu, use thunderbolt", that whole little scene looks abd. Ash is too low on the screen and his arm and hand are drawn pretty stiff. It also looks like Ash is naked due to the lack of arm sleeve. Maybe I'm just weird.
Those are just a few things. Overall, the art could use some work. Kinda funny, though. It's definitely relatable (many times have I almost thrown my GameBoy on the ground due to a combination of a Zubat encounters and one last Pokemon with HP in the single digits). You've definitely got loads of potential. YOU CAN GO THE DISTANCE. YOU CAN GO THE WAY.
LitPower responds:
Thank you, I'm glad not everyone is just saying "oh yeah your art could improve" but this comment has helped me a lot and given me a lot to think about for future animations, thanks a lot for the help! :)