Good game, I had fun playing it. Text wasn't too heavy, maybe a bit much, but not to the point where it becomes just a pain in the butthole to read. There's a lot of potential for more visual aesthetics. Speaking of visuals, while the characters are well-designed, what's the use of a 6 item-space inventory when characters only pick up one or two items?
Overall, nice simple game. A lot of room for improvement in the future.