Hey man not really sure why this is "Under Judgement" because this really has a lot of deep emotional story in it. I've seen better animation and artwork but for only your fourth submission this is really good. I'm giving this a 4 for a good story in my opinion and decent animation. There's always room to improve though. Glad to have watched this and I hope you have more coming in the future!
Reviews for "DMT - The Last Seconds"
Choppy animation but good concept
very well done. i liked it.
I liked this one a lot, i'm willing to bet the idea could easily be expanded upon.
On pacing, I think it is excellent. Cut out the boring "anime-cliche" panoramas and slideshows and just show us the good stuff. That's what this short does.
I was expecting something psycadelic and DMT related, although I guess you're referring to the natural version and not the stuff you smoke. It caught me off guard and it was actually quite moving. And from a technical aspect I liked the smoke effect on the cigarettes. Great job overall