Choppy animation but good concept
Choppy animation but good concept
Hey man not really sure why this is "Under Judgement" because this really has a lot of deep emotional story in it. I've seen better animation and artwork but for only your fourth submission this is really good. I'm giving this a 4 for a good story in my opinion and decent animation. There's always room to improve though. Glad to have watched this and I hope you have more coming in the future!
Loved the idea but you should provide a bit of a back story like maybe a flashback but great none the less
Your imagination is going just in the right way partner, keep improving, don't ever stop animating and thinking in new ways to tell your stories!
Beautiful, really good, the ending suprised me and gave me some "emotional flush" if I can say that.
Only a small negative feedback, try to work with some shading next time, it's not bad, but maybe with some shading it could be even better!
The voice acting is really good, the music is deep and I can say oddly that I almost feel the "good bye forever".
Good Job!