Coooorrrnnn dooggggg....Coorrrnnn dooooggggg C:
Reviews for "Jump the gap"
CyanSandwich responds:
I knew that was the best part!
Well, that was an unexpected ending...
I'm sure most people expected him to fall to his doom (as I did), but I think you did it better. Overall, it was a bit boring, the use of the word swag automatically ruined it (lol, I'm not marking down for that), the voice acting was bad... but the punchline and animation were both good. For 48 hours, this wasn't so bad.
CyanSandwich responds:
Cheers. I used the word swag solely because of how shit it is. Although maybe it's such a terrible word that even using it jokingly is unacceptable?
Nicely drawn but there wasn't much animation except for the mouths which at times is okay depending on the execution. This also in turn even affected your jump animation which didn't look very convincing. There were also parts i felt it quite evident the camera didn't focus on the character for a cinematic effect but instead to avoid you having to draw some mouth animation. Your drawing style is good but to become a better animator ur gonna have to take more time on your project to draw some more frames to show movement and then u'll be great. The script was quite sound though!
CyanSandwich responds:
Thanks for the review. Although I was being minimalistic with the animation because of the 48 hour time constraint on the movie jam.
Great animation, bad voice acting, and the overall plot wasn't very funny.
CyanSandwich responds:
Well, fair enough. Thanks for the 2.5. If we round up that's positive.