Coooorrrnnn dooggggg....Coorrrnnn dooooggggg C:
Reviews for "Jump the gap"
CyanSandwich responds:
I knew that was the best part!
lol @ hiding the mouths to avoid lipsync
Shiny and clean art though :3
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CyanSandwich responds:
Well, I was feeling very lazy and limited on time. Key word: lazy
Nicely drawn but there wasn't much animation except for the mouths which at times is okay depending on the execution. This also in turn even affected your jump animation which didn't look very convincing. There were also parts i felt it quite evident the camera didn't focus on the character for a cinematic effect but instead to avoid you having to draw some mouth animation. Your drawing style is good but to become a better animator ur gonna have to take more time on your project to draw some more frames to show movement and then u'll be great. The script was quite sound though!
CyanSandwich responds:
Thanks for the review. Although I was being minimalistic with the animation because of the 48 hour time constraint on the movie jam.
haha I liked it man, funny in the ways you were going for, and for a 48 hour jam with one artist you did great! Only constructive critizism would be on improving the art a little but hey, 48 hours can be a bitch ;) Nice work
CyanSandwich responds:
Thanks man!