I really enjoyed it, and the art is really good. With that said, I do believe the animation could be smoother. Either better FPS (difference between good and great is using 25-30, not 12-20), or dedicate more time to drawing/tweening. You are definitely on your way. Good job and keep producing.
Reviews for "1st Love"
Very nice.
This is pretty good. I love your background renders, they are very well composed and had a professional quality to them. I would suggest taking more time to study character animation. The movements you had read good enough to tell the story (which is the most important part btw), but they lack weight and fluidity.
Overall, great job!
-Anim8
Amazing animation, and a little corny, but I was expecting that. What I wanted to say was, whoever was singing, couldn't sing to save their life, it was awful. Might want to avoid songs by that artist in the future. Other than that, great job, keep it up.
liked the animation and the music that went with it (what is that song anyway?)
two things to change it though:
-characters seem a bit stiff
-more needs to happen, there's no real story there, perhaps you could have included a flashforward to the present again or something i dunno
other than that though, really good.