wait, on they clock it was 1998. Is that the time when you started making this?
wait, on they clock it was 1998. Is that the time when you started making this?
basically
Just ONE problem:
when showing the lovers holding hands the second time (very end),
the hands become anatomically incorrect. The thumb is in the wrong position for both people.
They also have a weird way of holding hands; maybe you should spend some time looking at different people holding hands.
Also, if the green shirt and purple shirt have switched sides, this should be more obvious.
This was the one inconsistency I found in this piece.
Good Things.
Visually spectacular!!!
The music felt good for this (lyrics weren't perfect, but the feeling was there)
I'm only being hard on you because it's good.
not bad... the first love is always the most memorable. and for me the most powerful. this video has bought back memories... thank you
coool stroy bro you made my day a bit better thanks i am honored to give you 4 points
Graphic were nicely done and music suited but still, it's not masterpiece but i'm sure you can become better storyteller in future with hard work.