I really feel like rewatching FLCL right now.
The way you described it, makes me to think more about the story. Since I'm still growing up and the last time i watched this show is about 4 years ago, I guess I'll definetly understand way more than back then.
So for the video it was good, i liked the drawings and liked the aspect that the review is really funny. Especially the voices you did. The fact that you wrote down some words to underline them. But I think it would be a good thing if you talked about the story a little bit, but showing examples, like 'using music as a weapon', was quite good.
In Short
That was a great review, that makes me watch FLCL again and had great drawings. Plus it made me learn new words!