that was great. the music really helped make the mood of the entire animation. only half a star off for the unfinished work because i know that it would be really good.
Reviews for "Planetoid - Chapter 4"
Fate responds:
Come back in a fortnight, I'm sure you'll say otherwise.
So... P37 was some sort of slave? (I would've expected something longer, like P3742-53, of course the P usually signifies type of robot.) What did he do, before all this? In the sequel, if you weren't already, you should try to fill us in what got him broken out in the middle of nowhere. It looks like there's a lot you can do with that big, abstract planet you set him in... I noticed interesting objects in the woods.
The animation could be better, but everything overall went pretty well. How long til the sequel comes out, do you think?
Fate responds:
Well what you're asking for is already out. This is the fourth chapter in the series. You can watch the previous three from clicking on my username, to the left.
Thanks for the interest though.
It's awesome :)
And as for when the next one comes out? Probably in a fair while, but there'll be a few shorts between then and now.
kewl music
Amazing.
I really liked this.
The music fit perfectly with the animation.
I've no real complaints about the plot or anything like that, though the ending was slightly ambiguous.
Though... There was something that bugged me. And it's quite a big thing... At times in this animation, you had pieces of excellent... and I mean, EXCELLENT, animation. The purple floor grid being shattered, the platform with robot guy lying on it revolving, zooming through forest to the broken robot ect... Those bits were amazing, like REALLY good. But then you've got bits of the flash were the drawings are very basic and some movements looked very stiff. I don't understand why the standard differs so much throughout.
Then I read the Author's comments, haha! So this is like a project spanning three years in which your skill increased? I see, that makes a lot of sense and I kinda feel like a douchebag having said what I said! Haha. Though I guess I still feel the same, the contrasting quality really throws me off. Still, it was brilliant to see how much you've improved. I only wish the entire flash was done to your full potential!
Either way, great flash. Look forward to more of your work xox
Fate responds:
Well, at the moment, I'm trying to smash out a game for the stencyl competition, but once that's done, I will be revisiting all the 'stiffer' shots, and updating them.
I just haven't had time to do that yet, but I know they are a problem, and they will be dealt with.
Thanks for paying enough attention to notice.
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