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Reviews for "The Monster"

its ok, kind of interested in the other side story now.

exninja123 responds:

Thank you!
Hopefully I will make it soon! :)

More animation and less words. Need to find a better way to unfold the story- the flow is far too slow to keep ones attention and the scenes of any art/rudimentary animation are few and far between.

exninja123 responds:

thanks for the review! :)

should those pepole even care if there kids are beat up because they seem not to have a problem beating the shit out of a little girl

exninja123 responds:

Yes :)
They're very selfish people.

The story culminated into the unintelligable and didn't explain anything very well. Also, your flash submission appears to be nothing more than a slide show. Your grammar needs improvement, but the art work was decent.

exninja123 responds:

yeah totally agree with you on that
thanks for the review! :)