was really digging the story line... bring on the sequal! loved the art style, and the classic pumpkin headed headless warrior/soldier
Reviews for "Headless Soldier"
exninja123 responds:
thanks! :)
I liked it. The part where he lost his head was creepy O.O with the music and such XD
exninja123 responds:
hehe thanks! xD
The art and story were pretty good, but there are more efficient ways of conveying a story. I think keeping the text and images separate really interrupted the flow of the story which was incredibly frustrating. Or if you think it'd be better to keep them separate, cut down on the amount of text.
Whenever the soldier was all, "Arghhh!!!!!!! Bitch!!!! You stupid whore face!!!!!" it felt repetitive because we kind of already know that he thinks the witch is a bitch. That is one example of text that could've been cut out without being to the detriment of the overall plot. Also, too many exclamation marks that make it dificult to take the soldier seriously.
I think with some more editing, this would be fantastic though.
exninja123 responds:
thanks for the critique!
I'll keep that in mind for the future! :)