Looks like a very interesting game, I would change the font to make it easier to read.
Reviews for "Hero's Last Adventure"
Characters a little too small and writing is hard to read.
Nice graphics, reminds me of old school Final Fantasy. But some info on controls would be nice.
the text runs by a little fast, and the character runs by a little slow, also, even if you have a button for controls in the start menu, (which by the way, was a difficult font to read), you should probably say what they are when you start, because a lot of people go straight to playing the game. (I'd say more, but i couldn't figure out where i was supposed to go.) eehh, 2/5.
Reminded me of old top-down rpg's, cheers for that :)
However, I'd really point out the dialogue speed. In conjunction with the font, it makes me have to repeat dialogues 2-3 times until I've managed to read what each char says. Perhaps slowing down the pace and enlarging things a little might make it more comfortable.
Also, found that interaction points are way too "picky" about where I'm standing. Had to run circles around a char to get them to talk.
Liked the token-naming, like Hero, Princess and Error. Gilbert would be proud :P
Sorry for anything I've missed here, but it's pretty decent for a first go ^^