Needs work, but it's pretty sweet for a flash.
Reviews for "RollerCoasterEP1"
I like it I really do but when they look to the side you draw his portfolio with a mouth but then you lip sinc a new mouth on a different part of the face
I couldn't read half of the subtitles because of the white on white background. That's something you should've fixed before uploading, most of your readers missed out on 1/4 of the story. I think the animation was fine, but you really need to work on the timing in the next episode. Really need to have quick timing. The frog bit of him sitting and blinking wasted my time. The frog part where he yells at it and it shows his little "I'm shitting my pants" part took too long as well.
Other than those bits, this was really cool. I could see you doing some excellent work and am looking forward to seeing more.
You've got a good storyline, and the art is rather good as well. The styling is not unfamiliar but not unwelcome and the voice acting is on par for the genre. I like it, overall.
I would have liked to have seen the subtitled plot lines acted out by the characters. It also seemed out of place and just randomly thrown in at that point. Felt like it needed something to make it necessary. Something like: "Why do we have to do this?" "You know the answer to that. (plot lines)".
The vocals in the intro were drowned out by the "background" music. Maybe that's just me, but it was hard to hear what was going on.
Keep on it! You've got a gem on your hands and I'd love to see you do it justice.
I think this has potential, the animation is nice but the flow is a little off. It makes transitions form scene to scene very awkward.
My biggest issue is with Audio, it was inconsistent. The music at times was overbearing and so it was difficult to hear the voice actors. It's just a matter of volume, since the quality was not too bad.
As for story, I'll wait it out till the 2nd episode t hopefully clarify. :]
sweetyluli responds:
Yep that darn sound issue. Will work on that. And yeah it will become clear in EP 2. I wish I could come out with longer episodes but they take wayy to long to do XD"""