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Reviews for "RollerCoasterEP1"

this is looking pretty spifftacular! as in, "coolness on a lollipop"â"¢ spifftacular... piques my interest, it does... would seriously rock if it was a full blown anime, whether as an episodic or feature 8)... keep up the great work, and good luck!

sweetyluli responds:

Alas, if only I has an animation team XD

Definitely not bad. The animation and art was excellent with a good amount of personal style to distinguish it. Another strong aspect was the music was well picked and complimented the style quite well. Now for some parts that need improvement, the voice acting (particularly in the beginning) was sub-par to say the least and even the parts I could easily make out (Thank you for the subtitles) weren't exactly well written. There was also a problem with the subtitles during the whole "intro to the island" part and the transitions with the music were quite abrupt and really disrupt the flow of the flash. Besides that it was excellent and I could tell a lot of effort was put in to this. You should continue making these, just take heed of the things that could be improved.

sweetyluli responds:

Haha the beginning was a little over a year old lol. But yeah I hope to see a lot of improvement in myself in ep 2 :>

some of the mouths from the side angle were abit ... strange

sweetyluli responds:

HAHA... I.. know XD""""

Wow,
Now that looks like it'll be an amazing series!!!!!!!!!!
However, I advise you to keep working on the animation.

sweetyluli responds:

Will do :)

had a few problems but seems very interesting can't wait to see more

sweetyluli responds:

I'll defiantly work on thous sort comings in ep 2 :>