ummm okay......no idea what to write...
Reviews for "StarNova"
What...is...this!
I like the drawing, and the manly voices make keily and bliss sound funny...
But I dont get the jimmy's part...
Overall, very good. I like that you kept things appropriate(there's just too much garbage on NG nowadays). Your character designs are very complex, and the colors are very appealing to the eye.
However, your storytelling skills fall very flat. I'm not so sure I understand what just happened, actually. I didn't see much of a storyline, much exposition, climax, or resolution. For instance, why was that guy trying to take over(...rob?) that store. What's the relationship between the antagonist and the protagonists? I suppose I have to give you leeway, since a lot of the plot holes seemed to have been intentional. Although, it didn't seem to have that comedic effect you were looking for.
Please, don't think that I'm hating on you. Certainly not, I'd just like to see a story more fitting of your level of artistic ability.
Twisted4000 responds:
Yeh plot holes were intentional. I was attempting to go for some anime-mocking thing, like in some episode nothing's really explained but the characters happen to have some previous relationship and conflict and
No but seriously that's a good review. I don't entirely agree with how the plot holes aren't funny, since that's more of a biased thing as opposed to a fact, but I see what you're saying.
This is the most righteous animation of all time, despite it having the misfortune of my presence.
Seriously great work. Thanks for involving me!
Twisted4000 responds:
See, one of the many awesome things about you is that you're so overly modest about your performance, lol. But you did an awesome job at voicing, would definitely use you again!