well... okey funny story and nice animation... but mediocre :S
If a freind of mine had made this, and wanted me to come with some last minute changes:
The blond kids voice.. its not as good as the other ones. Both quality vice (another mic?) and just the "acting" in itself.
AND
The story needs more phasing! Anything could do this! Some music while they talk, or faster editing, other angles for variety.. There's just something about it.. something that makes me wanna close the player and watch something else, because its to "slow and borring"-ish.. Luckily i didn't, cus it was a fun little story.
ALSO
The payoff is kinda weak.. Have it be like a giant exhibition, and the monkey like "LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!!.. it just a bit "hey, here it is, look, the died, lol"
Take or leave it, but thats my honest opinion.