This deserves a "5" do you know why?
Cos' it has potential written alll over it...and this will get you to the top...
I'm not even kidding...but there is still room for improvement... are there anything that you held back that would make this flash more appealing? If so you probably have to put that in...and tweak it a bit...
And...Ah fuck it I hate long reviews.. "Good Job" d(^_^ )d