The pacing of this is quite slow - which works fantasticaly if you have the time but those who are in a rush (likely the 2 below me) won't appreciate it as much.
Phenomenal work. Your humour is well timed and not too obnoxious.
The animations are fluid and satisfying, and the "detailed" scenes are a great addition!
The spelling is a bit off - perhaps you could type up the script onto a word document beforehand (to have it corrected by the program) and then paste in the lines?
Really enjoying this new take on stick figures thus far!! :D