Animation is rough, but has the potental to go somewhere. Keep it up and keep working on your style.
Reviews for "The Christmas Party"
The bright thing in not scoring high is that it leaves plenty of room for improvement. I sort of share Mr-Smashnbash comment on this (too lazy to type out the rest XP) but other reviewers already covered what needs to improve. All in all good job and keep improving.
Haha that was really good.
animation was nice and it was just a short funny little animation good job.
Funny, though the drawing and animation could be improved.
I don't really see anything wrong at all with this video. You have a unique draw style and I think its great.