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Reviews for "Echo Force Zero: Vol1"

Anime Inspired and Stuff!

Dunno if it was intentional or not but I was feeling some Naruto Shippuden (did I spell it right?) vibes throughout the entire animation (character attire, models, behavior, story, etc.) So is that the "anime-inspired" stuff? :P Its fine though, this series has some great potential!

First off, I admire an animator that posts something that is longer than 2-4 minutes, with decent animation nonetheless. And it is only going to get better from here! Music was great as well, especially the credit music.

Also, another plus, the menu. Scene selection, replay button, great additions to an animation if ya' wanna see your favorite scenes again, instead of watching it ALL over again (especially long flashes like this) You get brownie points for easter eggs and character bios! :D

However, with the good comes the bad. Animation was decent yet choppy in certain scenes, especially the more action-oriented ones. Personally, I felt the characters were rather cliche (distant protaganist, energetic support character, power-hungry villian, etc.) But, it would be unfair to entirely judge the characters in only one animation, your characters have room to develop and separate themselves from the carbon-copies out there.

All in all, this animation has proven it can be something more. You have worked hard on this and I hope you work even harder on the next one, and the next one, and the next one... you get the point. It has been a while since I've seen a good series on Newgrounds, you can definitly pull it off. We, as viewers, will have to wait and see what you have to offer.

As always, I am thankful you took the time and effort to animate this for us viewers. Some people don't appreciate all the hard work that goes into making an animation (its hard stuff brah!) I wish you the best of luck!

A possible fan, - Chaos

At the ending. Reply screen. Right click.

Right click then play. So you can see the secret scene :D!

This was a great effort!

I agree 100% with everything Xesolor said.
I couldn't stand the dialogue.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

THE BEST FLASH EVER SEEN IN NEWGROUNDS! I THOUGHT I WAS WATCHING A TV SHOW FOR A MOMENT!

like a real show

I'll try to be unbiased.

MUSIC -
Bloody LOVED IT, as expected of Newgrounds, the OSTs are just PERFECT, the music in Valiton sequences are a little cheesy/childish/Pokemon-ish, good if it's what you're looking for, but a little too light-hearted and out of sync with the rest of the sequences.

ART -
Thank god you didn't give them all massive anime-eyes, the animation and particularly the distinctively different art styles deployed in the different settings are GREAT. I can see the separate nations are based on stereotypical genres in fiction stories, Oratheer on devolved dystopia, Direstorm on medieval fantasy and Farvine on futuristic sci-fi. Used individually they are cliche, but combine them together brings about a freshness and distinctive contrast to each other, great design!

STORY -
My only complaints is the story and dialogue are too cliche and predictable. Too much info has been given in this first episode, from the evil overlord's domination plans to the introduction of characters. It feels like you tried to cram too much into one episode, revealing plots and laying out story context too quickly for viewers to feel comfortable or to digest. Too little info is boring to watch, but too much is also boring.

You could've kept some of the characters hidden for later episodes, gradually lift the veil on the villain's plans. One scene that felt REALLY unrealistic is the villain personally walking out to subjugate the last village in Oratheer - not even the most benevolent kings meet their lowly subjects fact-to-face, let alone a villain. The scene is purely there to introduce the villain's evil nature, which is unnecessary, and dilutes the villain's power and supreme status.

The pace works, the characters have distinct personalities (perhaps some revealed too soon, give it time to develop), the music is like an ORGY in my ears (especially the credit song), the art some of the best I've ever seen.

But the Valiton segments are CHEESY, maybe you wanted to introduce a apparently childish character that will mature, but right now, he's the most annoying character in comparison to the rest of them, which rather defeats his status as the main char. I'm sorry, it just feel too Pokemon-ish, but other than this rant, this is perfect.

Thank you, thank you for letting us see this FANTASTIC flash.

LewToons responds:

well all i can really say is THANK YOU!

I really appreciate this review -

I am beyond excited that you caught onto the 3 nations being each almost their own universe and time period - - adding to the ambiguous time period in general

the valiton segments arent meant to be more cheesy...but i suppose they were...let me ASSURE you, you nailed it on the head - - Jeero is meant to be the least likable ...and unfortunately he will stay that way for a while.

anyways - thanks so much for checkin it out - and i hope you keep watching and see these characters grow!