Simple
Very short and simple. That is a good and a bad thing. I usually like when an animation is short and to the point. Simple animations are also sometimes good. This, however, wasn't as entertaining as could have been. I'll tell you why.
The story/line ideas used in this have been done to death. I feel like I've seen these almost exact lines over and over in different comedy animations. They were funny, but after seeing them so much, they just didn't give me as much of a laugh as they should have. Originality is what this lacks.
The ending lines were probably the funniest and the best part of this as a whole. With that being said, of course, it seemed to end pretty abruptly.. you should have added a few more lines to it and made the ending a little better.
I love how this seems to be a completely random piece of work. I've always been a fan of the random and funny flashes.
I also enjoyed the art in this, the characters, how you drew them, and the outline of each. I really loved the animation overall. It was done very well for a flash animation.
I'd like for you to continue doing animation shorts such as these.
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