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first i wanna start by saying, i really, really dont like that "truedarkness"'s review... i find your humor funny in a way that im proud to recommend to my friends, out of all your uploads, my four favorites are this one, the two fable ones and the snowman one, the artstyle is done in a way that just cant be helped to be loved, keep up the good work and upload more, gotta have something funny to listen to while playing minecraft
Well, thank you :) It definitely helps me work to have someone who cares and is waiting for more.
Very smooth
This was a really satisfying animation - there was no jerkiness, only flow.
And your minecraft world is pretty cool too!
If I could just go higher
Love this, I just wish I could you higher than a ten. If you can somehow salvage a sequel from this, you totally should. Like an afterlife video or a prequel. Or maybe just defy all logic and make another one. Either way, awesomeness.
Get some Mechanics on that.
It was spectacular! (NO PUN INTENDED)
I very much enjoyed the humor and especially the voice acting! Great animation and very hilarious! I appreciated the red suit joke and to top it all off you added a TARDIS to the end of it! As a huge Doctor Who fan I must give you a gross of props for that! I hope you keep on making such great animations!
Agree with TarileFreak
Most of Newgrounds is 14-17 year old kids, so you can't go by them when they say "this was hilarious!! so funny". Your animation was good, but TarileFreak hit the nail on the head with a lot of things that could use some work. There were a lot of poorly written jokes, that while you may say fits the goofy style of humor you were going for, they come across more as lazy, with no real sense of purpose. (red suit joke). The trick to writing a good comedy is sitting down and writing out a script or screen play before animating. This way, even if the animation is bad, the writing and story is still solid. Fortunately, you did have pretty good animtion. Voice acting could use a lot of work (next time go on a forum and ask for multiple people to do voices for multiple characters. "hey guys, i need a really good black-guy voice for a character I'm writing up in a new animation I'm working on!").
All in all, not bad, but could use work. Keep at it though!!!
What's with ragging on the Star Trek reference? I think a brief red-shirt mention is perfectly acceptable in a sci-fi short. I rewrote this thing multiple times as always, I think I varied my voice quite well for the ones I did, and the "black-guy voice" WAS done by someone else who's quite a talented and Newgrounds-renowned voice actor. If you didn't find the short funny, that's perfectly fine. Everyone's tastes are different, and I'm honestly pleasantly surprised so many people do enjoy it. But every part of the story was exactly as it was meant to be and was worked on vigorously, and I'd appreciate it if it was not chalked up to laziness because your preferences differ from my style.