Great
This is a great short flash. Great work
Great
This is a great short flash. Great work
5 times, I watched this... and I can't stop laugh.
my ass off, this is a very nice short... I was wondering when you were going to upload another flash :D I really enjoy your work.
WTH HA HA HA
FUNNY
Good
The script was funny and the animation was solid. My only minor gripe was the voice acting. Not that it was bad, far from it, but it lacked a certain passion which would have made the jokes funnier.
Perhaps it just needed to be better projected, but I felt that every characters emotions should have been amplified. At the very least, the reactions should have felt like they were actually there, instead of sounding as if their lines were premeditated.
As I say, this is a minor issue, and the only reason I point it out is that more commited voice acting would have risen the animation from good to great.
Looking forward to more from you.
Yeah, you're probably right. It's harder to get specific character personalities into such a tightly packed space of so much going on. I'll definitely be working to improve on that in the future.
Shaweet.
Love the art :)