Lame for a preview
A preview is supposed to get people excited for the actual thing , this is too short and it doesn't show anything interesting which is why it failed at being a good preview . To be honest I don't think you should finish that sprite battle unless you have something damn good to show because sprite battles are overdone
well......damn
i see a LOT of potential for this, but the question is, what is THIS. please finish and resubmit. have a nice day and thanks for flying NGA, Newgrounds Airlines
WOW IT HAS COLORS!
anyway let's face it the animation doesn't seem that bad but come on it was so short we have no clue what is this series about and don't know what about other people but i can do this in 10 minuets anyway delete this and upload a fixed one overall:
animation: 0
Music: 0
sounds: 0
Directing: 0
Story: 0
Congratulations on your Turd.
Well, the title made me bite.
First of all, there's nothing to see here except two sprites facing each other. Which is kind off a letdown. If you state it as a preview, then show the actual battle. 'Till to the part where you stopped animated.
If you do make it, please tell me and I'll leave a review for you.
So my opinion... finish it.
For the meantime, I'll stay unrated until you submit the real deal.
Review 1
Pretty good drawings (+)
No preloader (-)
No Sound Effects (-)
This isn't a trailer, this is a work in progress, which belongs in the Alphas Section. If you wanted this to be a trailer, here's some advice:
1. Finish the movie
2. Make a trailer with scenes from movie
3. Make it say stuff like: "A battle nobody will forget!" and crap like that.
4. Put in a preloader!
I rated this a 1.