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I liked it up till the end
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I liked it up till the end
Yikes................................
Now that's a disturbing theme.
hmm
the artwork reminded me a lot of the brackenwood series. And the story was verry cliché, like you where busy animating and at the last bit you thought "let's make a story in it".
But other than that... the animation was smooth, so you are going in the good direction.
It was a great story but too short to get a chance to really enjoy it.
Wanted: Meaning...
I am being generous with the 3 star rating. Animation is passible for the fact it is on Newgrounds. The sound was probably not your fault, good microphones can cost some money. The storyline of a short film should be easy to pick up, all I picked up from this was some nature guy had a feeling a human died, did some stunts in the trees leading to a high water dive, then held her while some one shot him for no exact reason. Trying not to insult your work with the next comment, but this would of taken me 5 seconds to think of. If you had made it funny...I might of seen it as a joke. Please take this criticism to heart, I am not trying to mean at all, just truthful. These other comments that say "This is brilliant" are most likely posted by users who cant keep an attention span long enough to think about the video they just watched and went by the sudden mood they were thrown into. Keep up the work, Im sure with more effort you are capable of incredible things.