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Reviews for "A Lovely Plight"

Pretty good.

Fluid motions. I liked the way all the colors just flowed. Movement was a bit choppy. Music was pretty good. Voice acting was...awful. Definitely needed better sound quality on that one. I wish that we could learn a bit more about the characters though. The ends are left way too open. Who was the blue guy? why was he such an ass to the harmless guy? What was that girl even doing in the middle of no where???

All in all, i thought it was pretty good. Just the voice acting and the characters could use a tad bit of work.

8/10 4/5

aww she died an then it ended TT-TT too short but very good

Well

I was surprised at your art work and animation, smooth and really beautiful but...
it got confusing around the end.
I notice in the description you say it's an entry to something so that makes partially make sense why the storyline was confusing.
If you maybe just made him explore around a lot and viewing the scenery that would have been really nice actually.
OR
It felt like around the end you wanted to bring a storyline into this but then you lost motivation and got bored or something, unless this has a deeper meaning that I'm missing....
I recommend not submitting something with a confused storyline, or an unfinished ending, even if it was for a collaboration entry or something in that line.

Nice job on everything else though <3

:_:

I'm going to deviate from my regular Reviewing process and just talk about a few things here.

This animation was one of the most visually stunning works of art that I've seen.
Plenty of detail (for the most part) and some nice Ambient sounds to go with it.

However, After all that effort, it seems you skimped out on your voice acting/actor...
After spending so much time and effort on something beautiful like this, you really don't want to ruin it with some badly recorded vocals now do you?

Keep that in mind for future animations.
Good work.

what coulded be

a story with so much story potential wasted in a short flash with premature ending