hmm
the artwork reminded me a lot of the brackenwood series. And the story was verry cliché, like you where busy animating and at the last bit you thought "let's make a story in it".
But other than that... the animation was smooth, so you are going in the good direction.
WHAT?!!!?!
OK,i get the start of the beginning but how come he has to die when all he did was kneel down to her and then die from the arrow? Isn't he super human?
Interesting...
A 9, if only that i think you could have upped the sound quality in the end (considering it was the only line said.) That out of the way, it leaves you in question. Is the guy wrongly confused, or was he really just coming back to eat the lady? O-O And who was that other guy? And wow, those trees were drawn really well! So were the clouds- yeah, did you see the light beams? Actually, that detail struck me the most, because you didn't use the glow or blur effect to do it. Very interesting.
Nice bro.
I liked it, especially how u arched the girl at her rib injury to give the guise that the guy killed her; as it looked when he stood over her.
Also liked lighting effect you used in the woods.
Good job bro, especially on a time limit. Keep it up.
Well
I was surprised at your art work and animation, smooth and really beautiful but...
it got confusing around the end.
I notice in the description you say it's an entry to something so that makes partially make sense why the storyline was confusing.
If you maybe just made him explore around a lot and viewing the scenery that would have been really nice actually.
OR
It felt like around the end you wanted to bring a storyline into this but then you lost motivation and got bored or something, unless this has a deeper meaning that I'm missing....
I recommend not submitting something with a confused storyline, or an unfinished ending, even if it was for a collaboration entry or something in that line.
Nice job on everything else though <3