Simple
I think it was done quite well. Would've prefered when the character came in to see him lick his lips instead of sticking his tongue out, but that's just me. The story was original. Keep working with it and preferably increase the running time of submissions to come, doesn't have to be by much, but gradually increase per submission. The community will thank you for it.
Its arms give her away...
Apple is a actually a troll!!!
An ok flash
I don't think it's as good or as bad as some of these posts say. I've seen a lot worse animation and for an animator that doesn't take himself too seriously there's nothing wrong with being a bit rough round the edges. Saying that I don't think it was overly funny, mildly amusing I would put it. Could've been a bit longer, with maybe more emphasis on the chase but overall a decent effort.
Thanks for watching!
It was good, but not that good.
I don't really see why it got the front page, but it wasn't that bad. The animation and artwork was kind of bad and kept on wiggling, and the animation was a bit choppy. The sounds were annoying. It was kind of funny and the end was surprising, but it could have been a few minutes longer. It seems to me like people either love it or hate it. It's pretty good, but it needs a bit more work and could be a lot better.
lol
I love how I was eating an apple while watching this.
On a more serious note, the humor is nice, but the material needs work. Also, your animation skills need tuning. The animation needs to be more smoother. Sound effects are just plain. Overall, it's nice, but it just doesn't feel right.
Ok, thanks for watching!