yech...
Sorry dude, you get 4/10. I didn't like much of cartoony but you did your best.
Reviews for "-Space pirates-"
Surprisingly, I didn't like it. TBH, and I don't mean to be rude, but I voted 2 to be nice. I love your music and I'm a huge fan of, yours, Waterflame. And, although this was 10 years ago, and you were just starting, this is my second least favorite song by you, only in front of -Endgame-.
Beats are too loud.
Techno... UUUUHUUUGHlaurieHHUU!
Im not into techno... But my friend is! I'll tip him, because this is very good techno! I hate techno btw...
Waterflame responds:
you shouldnt judge by your own personal taste. rather how well the song was composed and mastered. but thanks anyways..
Needs serious work
The lead melody is very annoying, you should use a different patch. The sound effects are annoying too and should just be removed. Drums are too loud and overpower the melody and the bass doesn't lock too well with them. It's also very repetitive, you have a theme but no variation. All music consists of theme and variation as shown through the classical style. You need to have development, return to the theme, more variation and an ending based on the theme for it to be true music.
Sorry but those are the rules.