Don't listen to these sods about the structure or the drum lines. Everything sounds perfectly normal compositionally. In fact, this is one of the few moments where I like something you've done.
But holy compression, Batman! Your drums sound like they've been put through Soundgoodizer! This does NOT compliment your instruments, this is not some crappy trance song where you can get away with that kind of technique. Not to mention that your drums sound like they were recorded in a separate file and then inserted in. They do not sound integrated into the song.
Fix up your mix and I'd say you got a good nugget on your hands.