Reviews for What's Going On Here?

[joeyjoah]

Great

First off, you have a very charming artistic style. The exaggerated emotions fit the story just right -- when the criminal is surprised by the man's assumption that he is a mime, his reaction had better be surprise. That's something I think a lot of animators don't convey correctly anymore.

Also, Tomar was definitely a great voice choice (rhyme) for this. He certainly knows his stuff; no one else could've done both voices so well. I had to sift through the credits once or twice before I caught on to the fact that he did both voices.

Certainly a great way to start the year off. Just make the next one a bit longer.

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MyKindOfFlash responds:

Making the next one longer is something I'm glad to do. I'm always scared to make things too long in case people get bored or something, but that seems to be a common idea from the reviewers.

The thing is at the minute my animations are single jokes: the situation is contextualised, characters are established, the joke is set up then there's a punchline so there's no need for my animations to exceed a minute really. However, since forever I've wanted to do story based animations so I can include LOTS of jokes around a plot and have longer cartoons. So if people are ready for that, I guess I'd better give 'em what they want!

Thanks for the nice review!

[NekoMika]

Oh you're a mime D:

Wow was that guy stupid but funny. A broken window and a guy trying to jack his car and he thinks it is a mime. Pretty funny anyways. Good humor put to use here as well. The animation here was actually really nice quality as well.

As usual, TomaMoto did excellent voice acting for yet another person who asked kindly and showed good flash skills. The audio and sounds used here were good as well.

Overall, funny.

Review Request Club

MyKindOfFlash responds:

Funny is what I was hoping for! Thanks so much for the review!

[CroutonsOfDeath]

Great :)

That was a fun cartoon. You get bonus points for excellent production values as well; the voice overs were superb but that's to be expected from good sir Tomar (That kind of has a ring to it...) and the animation was great. Quite fluid and it reminded me of an old school tune.

The joke was pretty good too, perfect timing with the ending as well. The only thing I would have added is "Now he's miming a hit and run with that cop! That cop played along really nice!" ... was that too dark?

Anyways, I really enjoyed your 'toon mate. Also, the song in the credits was great.

MyKindOfFlash responds:

I did wonder how far to push the joke, I think you're little gag there could of been good!

And thanks for the first comment on the credit song. The queen of singing, Ella Fitzgerald. I like using old jazz music in my cartoons, I think more people today need to know about the greats.

Glad you enjoyed!

[Gecko41]

Fine Graphics

GREAT Graphics! I like them.

The Sounds totally okay. Better then alot on here.

But like some said before: Not very funny. Sry.

But keep going.

MyKindOfFlash responds:

Thanks! Now I have reached a point where I'm confident in my animation ability I can focus on improving my scripts and maybe collaborating with writers. Thanks again for reviewing!

[rookie4789]

Lol

Lol

MyKindOfFlash responds:

Thanks for the lols!