Got the right idea, but alot's not yours.
It seems like you understand what makes a decent fight scene, unfortunately all the good parts were ripped from random anime cartoons. I never forget shots when I see them, if you're going to copy shots from Sword of the Stranger and Naruto you need to at least give credit to people who came up with the real compositions. The parts you didn't copy were pretty stiff, I really think a better investment of your time would be learning to compose shots that are dynamic and fluid like the ones you referenced rather than just remaking them. But if I can recognize them, they were at least copied decently, keep practicing though. It's better that it look bad and be yours than look half decent and be copied.