Ok
Its an ok one, but the others are clearly the better ones, It has a certain look though, Hope you send in more stuff, like the ghost motel stuff? hehe, toodles.
Reviews for "Chess Checketboard #2"
Not your best
Not your best, but still neat and nice shine effects you gave itm i think if you made the board smaller it would show more of it, its another neat art thing.
Chess
Good drawing. I love the colors red and black together so this is appealing to me.
Not bad...
This is a nice picture, but nothing too eye-catching (a corner of a checkerboard O.o). Not a bad start, though.
The colours are the best things about this subission. I really liked that you put in blue, and the different shades of it were perfect, plus the red and grey contrasted well with each other. I also liked that you didn't just keep one shade of red or grey regarding the tiles, but in the middle of the tiles you put in different shades of the colour.
The concept is wierd. I can see the checkerboard, but I don't really see anything that has to do with chess except the title at the bottom left. Also, this was a little simple. Why don't you put chess pieces on the tiles, so that you'll be giving the theme of checkers with the board and the theme of chess with the pieces, and maybe even draw a hand about to pick a chess piece up. It'd lessen the simplicity of this picture, and give it more to look at than just a corner of a checkerboard on a blue background.
The tiles weren't the same size, as mentioned in the other reviews. If you look closely enough, you could see that the lines aren't parallel and some tiles are smaller than others which ruined the picture a fair bit, IMO. Also, you drew some unnecessary lines, such as the lines around the checkerboard and the lines on the grey tiles. Also, every tile corner shining was quite wierd too, maybe you could say why you put it there in the Author's Comments, or take it away entirely. 3D effect was cool though.
When it comes to the background, I disagree with Joshsouza, I think it was well done. The blue background fit well in the picture, and it wasn't that simple either, but had some nice texture to it. The only wierd thing was that the blue lost its texture and remained one shade of blue when it got close to the checkerboard. The frame around the picture was nice, but maybe you could check if when you take it off, it looks better.
It has its problems, like uneven tiles, lines that aren't parallel, and some wierd things like bright corners and one shade of blue when close to the checkerboard, but the background in general was cool, and the colours were excellent. Not a bad job overall.
7/10
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Some random lines here and there
There is some shading here and there, and some shine effects as well, but the lines on the grey and around the board are a little strange.
To me they don't truly serve a purpose other than being little distracting. The shine effects on the lines connecting the individual checker board parts are a bit strange as well.
But it's not to bad though, you've got a good start here. Just keep up the work. =3
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