Great story, could use a few minor improvements
I really like the plot and the humor, and the illustration is very good. Nice atmosphere from the music too.
Just a few minor complaints:
-There are some spelling issues.
-There should be a button to skip each section of dialogue, since they're pretty long, you see many of them multiple times, and it takes two clicks to get through each piece.
-On that topic, I don't see the point of the slow appearance of the letters. It's not fast enough to be faster than reading speed, and it doesn't really have any advantages over having the whole section of text appear at once (which would also cut in half the number of clicks required).
-There are some plot inconsistencies due to reuse of scenes - for example, I shot Norm at the beginning and then later he was alive (I thought he was a zombie or vampire [which was reinforced by Orion not appearing in the mirror] at first) and Orion shot him.
But yeah, those things don't detract much from the overall experience. Great work!