Predictable
It was ok, but I knew he'd find something like a pump and pump out fire or something. I spent at least a minute waiting for him to be burned to a crisp, so I was not surprised when it was pretzels he pumped.
Good job on the animation, but the joke sucked.
Fire is very different from pretzels, but I see how you could make the mistake of confusing the two. I too often confuse burning, hot fire with delicious, salty pretzels. There was this one time where I had a hankerin' for pretzels, so I went to my kitchen to eat some pretzels only to accidentally eat fire! I thought, DARNIT, not again! The fire tasted pretty good, though, so I kept eating it.
PRETZELS!?
Lol! That's rather mean. Even though the concept makes absolutely zero sense, the irony did make me chuckle.
8/10 for you!
Not worth that blood
Well in humor club when we discuss jokes wich we made and smbdy comes and start: "so when i was at my grammas she told me tha thing while i were eating cookies..." We all:"GO to the joke part!"
-Ok so i was eting cookies and they were rly good cuz my gram can bake,oooh yeah!
-Tell the joke all ready
-Ok so i spill some milk on the floor and i was like it's all accident cuz milk was close to the edge....
-FUCKIN joke allready
-Ok ok.So she trips and im all like now thats milky
*sfx cicades
-Emmm that's it?
-Yeah cool right.
Soo here is the same we all w8 for smth but in the end the joke isn't worh the w8ing time,it could be shorter or even not could be.
The animation was good though but the ending and the thing that WHY theres a FUCKIN hydrant in the middle of the nowhere?
At first I was baffled as to why anyone would need a club to learn what is humorous, but after I waded through the sea of insults to the English language that was your comment and reached the last sentence where you vehemently asked why there was a hydrant in the middle of nowhere, I saw clearly why one such as yourself would be in need of humor club.
Pretty good
Hehe, pretty good.
If only your comedy was good as your volcabulary
I honestly don't understand the community here, they think anything is funny, a thirsty man gets a mouthful of salty pretzels, the end...okay, are we in first grade?
while the commitment was there, you just didn't deliver the comedy goods. Your a decent animator and you captured the situation, but you need to work on your punch lines and delivery more. sorry man.
You're right, I probably should have thrown in some boobies or poop jokes or trite video game references or even heaps of unnecessary violence [yeah, I checked out your favorite'd movies, Champ], that would have been MUCH more high brow and grade A hi-larious. I bet you work as a professor of hilarity at Awesome University. If you don't, you totally should. To qualify you must love the stupidest and most unnecessary violence, as well as be an expert at making mediocre drawings of the X-Men. I bet all the lady-types love it when you trace pictures of Wolverine. I hear that's considered very sexy in the funniest and most mature cultures. I of course wouldn't know...I haven't even passed first grade yet!