Great art with a sub par joke
I love the style of the art but like a few people said before the punchline wasn't that good. The ascetics of the flash are great the voices are great, the sounds fit nicely and the art is really captivating. The flash is quite short but I don't really mind. This looks like a flash that could be the start of something great. If you want this series to be successful it might be a good idea to have the jokes reviewed before hand. I'm sure there are people on the fourms that would be glad to help hone your script. If you work on your jokes just a bit more I could really see this becoming a popular series.