"While Heaven Burns"
Originality is a 7. Everything in this genre has been done, but I hear a subtle sub bass in the backround. Nice :)
Diversity is a 9. Amazing changes of the melody whilst the song still sticks together.
Clarity is a 9 because of the crashes(in the beginning). It seems like every orchaestral composer on newgrounds always gets those volumes wrong on the crashes...
Effort is a 10. Nuff said.
Overall, 8. A powerful orchaestral piece that sounds very muddled in the beginning, and clears up a little later. Pretty unoriginal, though :(
Good work, keep it up!
-zenon