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Reviews for "_-/|While Heaven Burns"

Sounds very good

Hehe, at least this one does make me think of what the discription says. Would be a good backgroundsong for a scene in a flash that takes place in hell. Or in one of those Angels vs Devils flashes. Anyway, it sounded very good once again. Overall 9 out of 10.

MaestroSegments responds:

you should hear the final versio Auz, I am quite proud of it, that is once it wants to get off its ass and be finished. I've poured WAY too much time in that damn thing.

Nice work!

Hy there Maestro!

I've found your segment-account and I must say these sons are showing great things to come... especially in this case.

I loved the beginning: great action score here, with the choir, strings, drums... simply great, loved it...

After that the drums droped and the strings went on - and the organ came in. Well I don't know... I don't like that organ sound. A know what ypur aiming - a church organ sound would blow this stuff up (in a good way) - but this organ is a bit powerlessly sounding for me...

Anyway: patience maestro, wait for the right moment of inspiration and this song will be finished. I'll wait up.

P.S.: I've got a new submission and I suffered a lot with it - like you with this one. Pls drop a rev when you visit my site. "For King and Country" is the song.

yes!

another maestro added to the trinity. love this piece, just too short. pls finish it. ~peace~

Pretty good

I didn't like the beggining so much, but the parts where the tempo was very pronounced with the strings, and the part with the organ were very good. ^^

MaestroSegments responds:

I'm glad you liked those parts Alexander, because those are the parts I extended in the final version.

When will that FINALLY be done you say?! When the stupid song stops making me angry with rage >:(

Thanks for the review ^^.

Whoosh

Good, solid work.

It's not exactly subtle, a little bombastic for my taste, but you deserve a kudos for the energy and structured chaos you bring across.

Still, though it may just be personal taste, I think you could look into a bit more variation. You'd be surprised how effective a quiet interlude will be, it will amplify the overall suspense and make it much more colorful.

So in short, you have a really good insight in techniques and moods, but to make a really epic piece I think it lacks diversity a bit.

Great job though and congrats on 3rd place! Keep it up!

4/5

MaestroSegments responds:

the final piece has a interlude which does exactly what you were thinking about. This song's been pissing me off though, it just never seems to want to finish. I don't want to rush it, but I also don't want to slave away at it while other pieces could be made.

Thanks for the congrats and the review WinTang, much appreciated.