This could use som patching
The animation was really good, but frankly that's the only good side of this animation. Here are some things you might want to consider improving:
-The story could have been better. I understand it's about absurd humor but still, some coherency would be in order.
-The pace of the animation was a bit too slow in my opinion. I think it would have worked better if the scene switches weren't that long. You might want to check Egoraptor's submissions for reference.
-The sound quality could have been better. The voices were difficult to listen to.
-Last but not least - you should work on your english. The translation was quite bad.
Generally, I think you have talent for this and if you work on the aforementioned issues, I'm sure your future flashes will be terrific.
Good luck!